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Friday, 22 May 2015

Space junk

We are learning about space junk and if you want to find out somethings about space junk then check
this link out.

Friday, 15 May 2015

100 Word challenge

This week we have been 100 word challenge check mine out!

WALT write a descriptive story in only 100 words!
The 100 word challenge is a challenge to write a whole story in only 100 words! You can check how many words you have written by highlighting your writing and pressing Ctrl, Shift, C at the same time. Good luck!
Make sure you think about your story and read it to yourself when you have finished to check it is as good as it can be!
Your prompt this week is:
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I will be successful when:
Self
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I have used 100 words
my writing makes sense
have at least 1 complex sentence
have used full stops and capital letters, and one other form of punctuation (! , “ “ )


First use the complex sentence planner to start your writing.
Begin writing here:
before It was a wet day an a girl went to go find food the only thing they liked to eats was seeds if they, found lots they would celebrate but the little girl was not to go out. When it was wet because she could slip and break her bones but she went out anyways the wild was a dangerous place for a little person because it's filled with eagles that are hungry when the girl found some seeds she would climb  up to get food and take them but there was an eagle she ran away forever and did return to that eagle.

I have:105 words

Monday, 4 May 2015

Interesting facts

Hi I'm Jayzel and this is my audio record.
https://drive.google.com/drive/?usp=chrome_app#my-drive

I I'm really like recording my vocie its faster than writing.