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Friday, 15 May 2015

100 Word challenge

This week we have been 100 word challenge check mine out!

WALT write a descriptive story in only 100 words!
The 100 word challenge is a challenge to write a whole story in only 100 words! You can check how many words you have written by highlighting your writing and pressing Ctrl, Shift, C at the same time. Good luck!
Make sure you think about your story and read it to yourself when you have finished to check it is as good as it can be!
Your prompt this week is:
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I will be successful when:
Self
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I have used 100 words
my writing makes sense
have at least 1 complex sentence
have used full stops and capital letters, and one other form of punctuation (! , “ “ )


First use the complex sentence planner to start your writing.
Begin writing here:
before It was a wet day an a girl went to go find food the only thing they liked to eats was seeds if they, found lots they would celebrate but the little girl was not to go out. When it was wet because she could slip and break her bones but she went out anyways the wild was a dangerous place for a little person because it's filled with eagles that are hungry when the girl found some seeds she would climb  up to get food and take them but there was an eagle she ran away forever and did return to that eagle.

I have:105 words

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jayzel,
    Jayzel i like your writing because it is interesting,Did you know that i post my writing on my blog.I hope you see my blog!!!

    from Cicilia

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  2. Hi Jayzel,

    I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge. Did you find it hard to write a whole story in just 100 words? I find when I do the 100 WC I really have to choose my ideas carefully.

    I look forward to seeing more of your learning on your blog.
    Mrs Archer

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  3. Hi Jayzel,
    I like your writing in is very interesting and you know that my friend from England saw my blog. Hope if my friend see your blog.

    From Anas

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