Walt use precise nouns to add detail for our reader

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the MC Donald's  to get some Burgers. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between pepper pig and a elephant. After that we went to the Kmart to buy some clothes, I got two new t'shirts and dress's and a pair of Nike's. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the Diary to buy an Paddle pop . Lucky me!

Toolkit's

Yesterday we went to toolkit's when you learn more stuff.

We learn with New Windsor it was awesome we had prize's too.  

Rugby World Cup 4 sentence Recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about rugby world cup,because the all black's won!