This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the MC Donald's to get some Burgers. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between pepper pig and a elephant. After that we went to the Kmart to buy some clothes, I got two new t'shirts and dress's and a pair of Nike's. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the Diary to buy an Paddle pop . Lucky me!
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